laundromat
🕑 Added 2020-12-17 17:58:44 +0000 UTC thank you for proofreading!
Comments
dasism
The first sentence is good. The second is good as well. You can cut out anyway. Replace: "I've been milking" with: I lactate when they're swollen" Second paragraph is good. The rest is good too.
にゃんにけ
ミルク交換すれば良いのかな?飲んで飲ませて。(*ノωノ) ん~、良いでか乳輪と乳首!
オパイ(お仕事募集中)
「お断りよ」の部分が省略されている様ですが、"No way."などとするとより拒絶感が増すと思います。字数の都合で入らないかも知れませんが。
stevejzzz
Trade her cock milk for breast milk
zuper
The dialogue is good
Suggestion: "Why are you staring at me? What's so unusual about a naked woman? There aren't many people here and that guy is sleeping, so there's no problem. ... Breastmilk? That's none of your business. (Sigh) You're persistent... Yes, Yes, I've been milking anytime my breasts swell. Taste? I don't know. You can drink it if you are curious. Oh, Did you really drink it? Does it taste good? I see... You wanna drink it from my nipple? Don't get carried away."