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Survivor

🕑 Added 2020-08-10 06:26:55 +0000 UTC

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オパイ（お仕事募集中）

ゴリラさんの満面の笑みが爽やかすぎる……！これは惚れますね（錯乱）

あぶぶ

>Monkey bestiality is not common. That's true. Someone need to keep drawing apes.

scorpionius

Nice! I missed your bestiality stuff. Monkey bestiality is not common. Glad you did this.

あぶぶ

oh thank you ! I'll fix.

あぶぶ

thanks! I'll fix

ice ninja

I'm up pretty late, but this is what i can find to fix. "Oh, thank my child. But I already have the clothes given by this monkey." should be "Oh, thank you my child. But I already have clothes given by this monkey." "He taught us where to find the food and water, so it is not good to say that way." should be "He taught us where to find food and water, so it's not nice to say that" "There are no girl monkey, so you never saw it?" should be "There are no girl monkeys, so you have never seen it?" "A new member will joined our family soon, so look forward to it!" should be "A new member will join our family soon, so look forward to it!"

AQA

This looks great! Thank you. These are my suggestions for the text: >Oh, thank my child. But I already have the clothes given by this monkey. >Oh, thank you my child. But I already have clothes given by this monkey. >He taught us where to find the food and water, so it is not good to say that way. >He taught us where to find food and water so that isn't a good thing to say. >Ah don't touch it, There are no girl monkey, so you had never saw it? >Ah don't touch it. There aren't any female monkeys here so you never saw one? >Can you fetch us water? >Can you fetch us some water? >Leaving that aside, a new member will joined our family soon, so look forward to it. >Leaving that aside, a new member will join our family soon, so look forward to it. There may be something else but this are the ones I could think of. Looking forward to see more!