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Unsealed Scrolls II - Jiraiya trains Naruto

🕑 Added 2023-05-25 22:42:52 +0000 UTC

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Primordial Vortex

Idea bin brah. 1 would technically be the Great Sage which is OLD.

MacArther

Wait...so is this the 1st chapter....or is it chapter 2 and I've misplaced my chapter 1?!

Primordial Vortex

This happens every month and I still get this question. :haha: I made it available for the 3$ patrons cuz I'm doing a double update in september.

Ice fox

I don't get it why did I can email about this updated what did you change?

Codeninja676 (Brian)

I truly wish this becomes at least a short mini series if only because I love sarcastic playful Naruto.

Cha0sniper

It's spelt 'sage', a 'siege' is launching boulders at a fortress.

Kurtis Moxley

Love how the other Jōnin didn't even pretend to tolerate Kakashi's favoritism of Sasuke.

Ice fox

That the siege of 6 paths Was the dad of the tale of beasts and his entire family tree to be honest I Hate it that entire plot line

Primordial Vortex

Working on something spicy rn. Continuation of previous QoQ.

Primordial Vortex

Seige thing?

BAC

Ah yes. The spirit of youth

Gilorad

Fucking amazing! Love the chapter!

J~ToT~O~ToT~S~ToT~E

If you can fond the time to work more on this it would be awesome that and adding this to the wait list with your other story's, thunderous soul how I long for thee. Anyway keep up the great work

Sean Quinn

and doesn't get told any of this until he's almost killed and REALLY needs it.....just to make it more dramatic. These ninja are not ninja, they are actors. A real ninja would use everything to their advantage and any Hokage should have wanted Naruto trained to his limits because of his potential by his most dedicated and hard-working ninja, not his laziest, aka Kakashi.

Ice fox

The thing I didn't like was the That whole Siege thing but I've never like that part 1

TheSinful

Kishi: "Naruto is the no-name underdog with no advantages." Also Kishi: "He's related to four of the hokage, related to literal royalty, the reincarnation of the son of ninja jesus, has the legendary Uzumaki bloodline, has the power of the strongest of the tailed beasts who can solo the others with ease, and his signature technique lets him learn things at 100x the pace of anyone else or even faster!"

Lord Terra

This was an awesome chapter and I’m always a sucker for stories where Naruto actually gets trained and isn’t just the underdog the whole time. Would love it if this got continued at some point but this is a great stand-alone chapter in any case so it’s fine either way.

Sin Hunter

I understand, dude. I rarely check out the Naruto Fanfiction section anymore but I’m very happy to see this magnificent number from you. Honestly, I’d love to see this continue.