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Emerald Phoenix 13

🕑 Added 2023-05-22 05:27:29 +0000 UTC

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Jamie Celtic

I've read hundreds of mha stories that included obstacle race and i've got to say this beats them all hands down with only a few coming close really cant wait for the next chapter

Primordial Vortex

Cheers everyone! Hope you enjoy! (For 10$ patrons, no change. this is just allowing the 3 and 5$ patrons to read it)

Lucio Morales

i love the way this story is going and that obstacle was pure sadism that fanfics love to attribute to nezu and it was done spectaculary.

Primordial Vortex

Basically, Rule was a placeholder cuz we hadn't thought of anything better at the time.

Flbiv

Just finished rereading the entire story and am loving it even more after refreshing what I know. Did come across an oddity in my rereading. Yui’s hero name during I-Island was Rule, wasn’t it? Now on the Sports Festival it’s Nexus? Did she decide a last minute change to her hero name? Or am I just getting confused over nothing? Either way, still such a great story and can’t wait to read more from it!

Flbiv

Sounds like a mini-Eraserhead is not have a good showing. Doh!

Primordial Vortex

Well everyone got it at least once. Bakugo sure was some good comedy tho :kek:

Primordial Vortex

Also spoilers for second and third events: "Damn Sports Festival and its discrimination against people who don't exercise." :kek:

Primordial Vortex

Thanks! I had a goddamn blast writing it. Huge smile on my face the entire way through

Ice fox

Don't remind me I'm happily to think that guts only ended in 2010 Thank you very much And nothing anyone says can change my mind the Nile is not just a river and Egypt is a state of zin as well

TheSinful

"That is a name I have not heard in a long time. A long time."

Gilorad

I love how bad it went for blasty

Ice fox

The final obstacle reminded me of GUTS witch I wasn't expecting to think about today good job

Gilorad

Fucking amazing!!!

Flbiv

Excellent chapter! Definitely one of the more unique versions of the 1st event that I’ve read. Kinda makes me want to rewatch wipeout and MXE. Also very much intrigued with what you have planned for the 2nd event, especially with it starting while the 1st event is still going! Can’t wait to read more!