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[Incomplete] It's Always Bunny in Musutafu II / Critical Overcharge II
🕑 Added 2023-02-01 05:27:55 +0000 UTCHey all!
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Primordial Vortex
I'd love to say this is getting continued... but tbqh, it likely won't be unless I skip around a LOT. Would honestly be too samey compared to EP
VukSol
Such a phenomenal second chapter! How much must we bribe you to write the next volume?!?!
Landrogar
Very nice.
Sin Hunter
I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!! The lemon was tasteful and I would very much love to see this continue.
Codeninja676 (Brian)
Welp I need at least 2 more chapters of this stat mostly because I don't see AFO and the league surviving more than 2-3 chapters if he's cloning his quirk via fun times.
Primordial Vortex
kek. Makes it so he can't steal the original quirks either
Kaminoryu
Was just rereading this and realized this is basically AFO’s nightmare scenario. If he’s cloning OFA, even at its base, then there will be multiple versions *that he can’t steal*. Even with just 2 vestiges to fight his attempts, given he would have tried with the first couple of holders in canon. I can see him putting out bounties if and when he discovers they exist, just to keep them from growing too far.
Primordial Vortex
Also, bit of a kek: This story turned into MILF hunter Izuku :rofl
Primordial Vortex
The quirk is being cloned, not the potential in it. Rumi built up the power herself through her innate strength and training. She was just given the base version of OFA. I wouldn't be against ONE quirk being copied per girl.
Kaminoryu
Huh. I'm guessing he has to pass the cloned quirks on through DNA? So he could theoretically pass other quirks like Blackwhip to others, like say Nemuri to give her a good offensive and defensive option. Could even give some to those he's not dating like his classmates via the old hair trick. Or would the strain of multiple quirks thing still apply?
Primordial Vortex
That was one of the things that wasn't complete lol And yeah, that was the one where his quirk was "Quirk Cloning"
Kaminoryu
That. Was. AWESOME! The sex scene with Midnight was amazingly done by the way. My only complaint was not getting to see Izuku break her with 5%. And that ending scene especially was nice. I'm guessing you went ahead with that one idea of Izuku having a copy/sharing quirk he just couldn't use, like the First with his ability to pass his quirk on?
