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[Stalled] The Tournament of Power

🕑 Added 2023-02-01 05:12:12 +0000 UTC

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Xander1994

It's all good man, when inspiration hits ya it hits ya, you can't force these kind of things. So by all means man take as much time as you need, I'd rather wait years and get an amazing chapter than wait one month and get something that's not your best work. And that's not taking IRL into account as well so no worries bro, if and when you do get back into this story it's gonna be amazing, so keep on doing your thing and keep up the great work man!👍

Primordial Vortex

Vegeta didn't need a ritual to manage it eventually. Hope I eventually manage to focus back on it...

Xander1994

This was really well done and I loved all the fluffy goodness between goku, kale, and caulifla. And I like the twist in the plot with buu, chichi's passing, super saiyan 4, the whole nine yards. I can't wait for part 2 of this story. I do have a question though, how were they able to become a super saiyan god without 6 saiyans with righteous/pure hearts?

Primordial Vortex

Aye, that was what I was going for. It sure was a spectacle, but the U6 saiyans had ZERO reason or cause to be as strong as they were.

Unreal Wolfman

love this a lot, it pays respect to goku's power, experience and skill without effecting his character overmuch and still having challenging fights for him. it also shows the universe 6 Saiyan's as having lots of potential it doesn't immediately have them matching seasoned Saiyan's decades older than them.