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Mass Effect Ch 3

🕑 Added 2023-04-14 03:23:34 +0000 UTC

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Cha0sniper

Holy shit, I can't believe it took me this long to find this story xD

twilightwanderer

I'm quite late to the party on this one, but I really enjoyed this story so far and I hope the muse for it returns someday

Jordan Amelian Irvine

Mass effect with actually competent governing bodies? my god this is quite the AU. (fuck I wish we had those in real life) And honestly ME3 isn't bad as long as you ignore the "Starfucker." Also to be fair I play Paragon which makes the story make more sense, at least personally.

Primordial Vortex

It's kind of funny. This originally started as a "humanity fuck yeah!" fic by necessity since the goal was "fuck ME3 with an anchor." And then I was like, "Wait, why do JUST that when I can COMPLETELY fuck it?"

Primordial Vortex

Glad you enjoyed it! And those changes will keep on piling and piling. We cooked up some good shit to swing the ending of the first game :evil:

AC DC 1C 2C

That...actually make a scary amount of sense.

StormCalledRaven

super excited to read this! YAY! and another internet Hug for you!

J~ToT~O~ToT~S~ToT~E

I love the little bits of information in passing conversation of just how grand the unity between human, quarian, and geth is it gets the mind Juice pumping. And a probable name for this could be 'Trinity Effect' lifting each other to new heights maybe 🤔 idk loved the chapter anyway even with the info dumps and I can't wait for the next on

Flbiv

Excellent chapter! Really love what you’ve done with the citadel visit and the changes that further grow with each new chapter. And boy are there some hefty changes! Getting that early evidence on Saren, indoctrination, the heretic geth, and the intact beacon helped cut through any stonewalling by the Council and also made them aware of the true threat, if only just shadowy edges of what looms in the future. The choice to have Benezia replace Tevos as the Asari councilor was an inspiring choice. Where before in canon she was a strong ally for Saren and the Reapers, now she’s a strong ally against them. It does make me wonder how Ferros and Noveria will be like without her. Will Tevos be Saren’s indoctrinated ally instead? Who will be used by the Thorian to get the Cypher? Can’t wait to read more and find out how far we may deviate from what we knew from Mass Effect canon. Found the Andromeda reference interesting with Miranda in a symbiotic relationship with EDDI, looks like Alec Ryder found the best timeline to be in! And we get an early introduction of the Illusive Man, who I’m definitely getting space Nick Fury vibes from. And I laughed out loud from the imagined scene of Jack vs Benezia! Keep up the awesome work! And I’m sure the title will come to you. Still a proponent of Mass AUffect, but that’s just me. Thanks again!

Primordial Vortex

Aye, it's like anathema isn't it? Honestly, half of me can't help but think that the Citadel itself is low-yield indoctrination causing because I've NEVER seen leaders so unwilling to act.