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FAN EXCLUSIVE: Lust Monsters x Magical Girls Series Rough Synopsis and Sketches
🕑 Added 2025-05-02 10:00:00 +0000 UTCGreetings!
I would like to share you my rough draft about the characters and the world sorrounding my old series, Lust Monster Entries. Though I have no final name for the series, I would still stick to Lust Monster Entries for now. In this post I introduced the first 2 girls and a concept sketch of how they're defeated by one fo the LMEs I made.
I have no prior writing skills so please bear with me, I just love to make the world, lore and characters I made, and I feel like wasting my time and energy if I dont give a background or an explanation on the LMEs I make.
The World of Lust Monsters:
Lust Monsters are ordinary men succumbed by the Curse of Lust, a phenomenon brought by a deal with a devil from an unknown individual "Patient Zero". This Curse of Lust made all the men in the area, give in to their carnal and lustful desires and mutate into grotesque beings whose only purpose is to inflict their sick desires on all the women they see. This Curse of Lust is contained within the Megacity of Zone A .(name pending)
This made all the male population in Zone A reduced to zero and thinned the female population. No one knows or have witnessed what happened to the women succumbed by the Lust Mosnters, there's rumors that they were turned into seed bed for the Lust Monsters to multiply.
Magical Maidens and The Maiden Corp :
It seems all hope is lost to Zone A until one day, a woman whom thought to be missing was found, alive and well, donning a beautiful and a provocative dress. She was seen slaying the Lust Monsters. She said while she was on her last legs upon the abuse of Lust Monsters, she was called upon by a mysterious force, a force that said to counter the Lust Curse, and was given the power to slay and purify the Lust Monster who was abusing her. She then states that the purified mass that came from the Lust Monster can now be harnessed to turn a girl into a "Magical Maiden". These Magical Maidens now have the power to fight off Lust Monster to certain extent by utilizing their inner sexual energy to purify them. This woman who was nicknamed "The Mother", founded the Maiden Corps, a group of women who offered themselves to become Magical Maidens to fight off the Lust Monsters.
Magical Maiden's Physiology and "Internal Purification"
Magical Maidens are built to resist the attacks from Lust Monsters. Their body and organs are durable from the magical energy from within especially their orfices or "entry points" which the Lust Monster mainly targets them. Their vagina and uterus are especially durable and elastic as its their main source of magic. Why is this relevant? It's because, how adept they may be in combat and fighting off Lust Monsters, most cases they're gonna be overwhelmed and be used as an outlet for the monster's sexual desires.
That's what "Internal Purification" goes into action, a pact sworn by Magical Maidens when all hope is lost, they would offer themselves to be the plaything and an outlet for the Monster's desires. As monster's appendages went inside the Magical Maiden, their womb's core would purify the monster from within once the monster's desire is satiated, they would revert back to the man they were once was. But the maiden must endure these Internal Purification and as the abuse and pain goes too much, their magic will go into overdrive and turn it into pure pleasure. This pure form of pleasure will eventually break the mind of the maiden and turn "broken", a husk of their former selves, only a meat doll to serve the desires of the Lust monsters. These broken maidens must be retreived at all cost to return to their previous state, as magical madiens are truly be immortal because of their magic and the lust mosnter's magic are one of the same and they in turn supply the maiden's the magic to continually survive. An unretrived broken maiden will continually be used by the monsters.
Magical Maiden's Recovery:
Once a broken maiden has been retrieved, they are brought to a secret room owned by lead magical maiden, "The Commissioner". The other magical maidens will then offer their magical abilities to the commissioner to turn the broken maiden body's to a "returned state", all of her injuries, and damage will revert back to the point before the incident happened. But there's a downside to this, the recovered Maiden will have no memory prior her defeat, this may prevent trauma from them but in turn the information that maiden has gathered from the mosnter and the experience has lost. All recovery efforts are made post mortem, and very little known about the attacks and the lust monsters itself has gathered since most expeditions and missions of Magical Maidens ends in a missing case or a "wipe"
Protagonist: "The Bookkeeper"
All of the monologue and entry of the Lust Monsters are made by the protagonist "you", an unamed man with no memories, an anomaly, immune to the effects of the curse. You were found by 2 magical maidens wandering around by the hellish landscape of Zone A. It seems the Lust Monsters are ignoring you or even treating you as their own. With this unique ability, you became a valuable asset to the Maiden Corp. "You" are now a witness, "you" can now record data of the Lust Monsters, "You" are now called the "Bookkeeper". Throughout the Lust Monster Entries are now written by the witness report of the Bookkeeper, The Bookkeeper are now asked to accompany the Magical Maidens into important missions to gather and retrieve valuable data about the Lust Monsters.
The first 2 maidens i made is the 2 maidens that found the Bookkeeper;
"Triage Maiden Mia"
Mia came from the rehabilitation sector of Maiden Corps, a nurse who tends to the recovered men that were once Lust Monsters. She's a talented medical specialist who were a candidate to be a Magical Maiden but she often refuses. Not until the recent events were the Mother went missing and the Maiden Corp unit was reduced to only 1 squad, she was forced into becoming a Magical Maiden. She has a unique ability to restore strength or "heal" her own body or with other maidens. Her spirit weapon is a staff. She has a naive but caring personality, her best friend is Lyra and is often paired together in missions. She's an S ranked maiden even though only becoming a maiden recently as she has the highest success rate in missions due to her unique ability and careful nature. She's often on guard on men including the bookkeeper since her old job was caring for former Lust Monsters, she has heard of the vile deeds and stories told by them. She has no history of internal purifications yet but there was grim and looming feeling that she'll do her first and it concerns both her and Lyra.
"Lancer Maiden Lyra"
Lyra is a veteran Magical Maiden that wields a magical spear, She usually assigned as the vanguard of the squad. She's a laid back, happy go lucky girl who often pokes fun at her peers, especially Mia whom she pities as she was forced into a role that she has no choice in. Her laidback, carefree attitude lies a dark history of her, she was part of an elite squad that was wiped out by an unknown "titan class" Lust Monster. On the site after the incident, she was the only one found in a broken state while the others went missing, presumebly taken to a deeper level to become a toy or a seedbed. She's also unique like Mia but to an unfortunate degree, whenever she reverts back from her broken state, her memories stay intact, all the defeat and intense pleasure she experience on her internal purifications, she remembers it all. Her memory rentention make her one of the most valuable asset of the Corp. Because of her past, she vows to protect Mia at all cost. She also makes fun and sometimes flirt with the Bookkeeper.
That's all of the infodump and lore about the Lust Monsters, here's a draft or a sketch preview of their defeat at the hands of a familliar Lust Monster;
Heres a brief narration about the sketches;
"Glans Head Brute has found its perfect vessel, Mia with a unique restoration magic, makes her durable crown for him. An extremely unfortunate first time for an internal purification, at the hands of titan class Lust Monster, Lyra's efforts are futile as she only broke the brute's chastitiy belt, exposing his massive 2nd glans. The brute was furious for breaking his chastity belt, as a punishment, she turned Lyra into one, serving solely to contain the massive object."
All the names and character designs are subject to change. Im sorry for some grammar and spelling issues as writing is not my forte, but I do have a passion in writing stories and scenarios in my mind, I seemingly dont have the skill to type it out, only draw it haha.
Sorry for the long text, let me know your thoughts about this, I would really appreciate the feedback! Im considering getting help writing or a good translation for japanese someday.
Comments
J Fn Acc
I LOVE HENTAI SO MUCH💕💕😍😍😍
Bulgey
I am still working on expanding that concept a bit but my working canon would depend on the type of monsters that are impregnating the girls. If some low ranking monsters are birthed from the girls, for example, a lust worms/tentacle mass/etc, it would be cleansed into a purified mass that can be used to power up or heal a broken maiden. In some cases a high ranking monster would impregnate a maiden, the said offspring can be purified into a human child, these purified human children has high innate magical properties and has a high potential to be a maiden if the child is female. If said offspring matured without purification, it can mature into a high ranking Lust Monster. Theres some cases thar it can turn into something else but I'll expand on that on future entries
SadisticMonster
I really like the lore and character backgrounds in this. Also, despite my fetish being very extreme I do appreciate that none of the girls are actually killed and instead used as eternal fuck toys or seed beds until rescue comes. I also, like how you made us all book keepers that get to witness the events first hand, good immersion. I am a bit curious though, from what I am reading it is the magical maiden's job to endure these lust monsters in hopes of siphoning the curse out of the men so they return back into normal. What happens to the monsters the women birth? Are they partially human and when cleansed turn into human children or are they purely monsters that need to be purged?
gummytube
parts of it are a little cliche tbh, but it's a fresh twist on solid foundation - classics are classics for a reason. moreover (as far as i can tell) we're sorely lacking on magical girl stories with some *really* extreme deformation (esp. atwts) so this would be really welcome.
kyur
You should audition for MasterChef cuz you're cooking with this one! If writing is your dream - go get it, champ, we'll be there to support you ;)
