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[Living for tomorrow] Chapter 15 - A Deal (I)

🕑 Added 2025-07-17 23:32:40 +0000 UTC

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Grumpy Wolf

The trip by train takes like 8 hours. The two scenes didn't necessarily happen right away, in a matter of minutes. But I'll make it clearer in the chapter. Thank you

Aaron Orr

Something that was noticed in this chapter that you probably want to go back and correct: Right before Harry ended up in the Compartment With Simon, Elora, Elspeth, and Luna he left Florent/Fleur in the compartment with two firsties to sleep off the portkey travel, yet you referenced Fleur multiple times as being in that compartment with Simon, Elora, Elspeth, Luna, and Harry?

Hadrian v.E.

This "prank" is so stupid. Miscommunication and withholding of facts can lead to serious negative repercussions down the road. But Harry's casual demonstration of various seemingly non-threatening magiks in combat is pretty badass.


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