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[Eclipsed] Chapter 8 - Lost

🕑 Added 2024-12-06 07:29:09 +0000 UTC
[Eclipsed] Chapter 8 - Lost

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Yashin Ryogi

Radiator: Quite the creative liberty to let Kurama be able to know all the languages, wish rolled with weak Naruto for a bit longer than 3 sections of the chapter

Jack Blaze

Well, I was both wrong and right about where he'd end up lmao And man, if Naruto got a nickel each time he met one of his wives for the first time in a highly hostile environment where the two of them were enemies for a time, he'd have two nickels, but it's weird it's happened twice. Sorry, couldn't resist making the joke Anyways, hilarious "How I met your mother/father" stories aside, I like how you went about introducing Starfire - don't think I've seen it happen quite this way

Grumpy Wolf

Yes. We saw shinobi breathe in space with no problem

BlackAce5ds .

So Chakra can enable you to breathe in space? Suppose that is canon given Naruto the Last

Omar

Why is he keep doubting his negative senceing ability it's his most valuable skill

Grumpy Wolf

Dakrseid never stays dead forever. That said, it remains to be seen whether he will reappear in the story or not

Devanshu Tripathi

Is DarkSeid really dead or is it just one of his Avatar?

Grumpy Wolf

Yes, I wanted to do something different from the usual "Starfire is chased by Gordanians and falls into the MC's arms" scenario

charger2040

All right my man, I see what you are doing here. Awesome idea using the war world episode as a segue to introduce Starfire to the story. Well done very well done indeed. And this will make a more interesting introduction for later on between the three of them


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