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[The Nexus] Chapter 1 - Prologue

🕑 Added 2024-10-09 06:28:15 +0000 UTC
[The Nexus] Chapter 1 - Prologue
[The Nexus] Chapter 1 - Prologue
[The Nexus] Chapter 1 - Prologue

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scifighter

So far this great and cant wait for more

Tau Volantis

Understand completely. Wish more of the industry understood rather than shoving their "values" down our throat. As far as waifus, there's Mara Sov. She only appears for a little while in the main story but I know for a fact that she made a lot of young mens balls drop when she was on screen. Also sad to say, their all time consuming as destiny has been out for a while and has been getting semi regular updates to its story. The last video, I 🤔 think, remember monkey brain, has the full main story of destiny without the added fluff of lore. But despite how hot Mara Sov is, she got nothing on 2B or eve. Still think it could work though. But it would be difficult as destiny's main character is made by the player. Aka customized character. But other than that the stories are pretty good. Not on the bawling your eyes out level of Nier, SERIOUSLY, they must have some sort of depression or tragedy fetish or something. I've read greek tragedies happier than that. Geez. But it's still good, rather activating the monkey brain for waifus it activates the monkey brain for explosions. They should talk to Tourgue, they'd have fun.

Grumpy Wolf

But i'm almost 100% certain i won't write for destiny. There are far to many concepts i want to write instead. So many. And i tend not to get into new fandoms unless there is someone like Ahri from LoL for exmaple lol. Monkey brain gets activated

Grumpy Wolf

If it's not too time consuming, i'll check the video out 👍

Tau Volantis

That's just fine. It's hard to make a destiny fix work. Primarily because of how expansive the lore can be sometimes. All I ask is you check it out and think on it. Never know, and never say never. Also check out StarWarsFan1999 and the story Protoss Overmind on fanfiction.net I hope you like it

Grumpy Wolf

I'm at work now i can"t check the links out. But i'll be honest and not lead you on, it's unlikely I'll ever write a Destiny fic :D

Tau Volantis

I don't know if these will work but if you copy and paste them starting with "https" and ending with "d" should take you to the videos. Destiny has been around a while. Not as long as Harry Potter or warframe, but a longer amount of time than nier.

Tau Volantis

Destiny is well this https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=zzBmOeYmN_M&t=2643s&pp=ygURRGVzdGlueSBmdWxsIHNhZ2E%3D https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=2k970tSgnuo&pp=ygURRGVzdGlueSBmdWxsIHNhZ2E%3D. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=9H5ixToFZKw&pp=ygURRGVzdGlueSBmdWxsIHNhZ2E%3D.

Grumpy Wolf

Not familiar with destiny. But i do plan on writing a HP/warframe fic soon (heard warframe shares some similarities) As for Harry shouting spells, well, that will gradually disappear, the more he ages

Tau Volantis

Your absolutely right. However at the same time, it post apocalyptic and has more of a sci-fi theme. Also the magic works on a fundamental different set of rules. No wizards, chants, or wands needed. Honestly, I think destiny would fit better, but that's just me. Harry Potter shouting spells and waving a wand around to use magic while no one else needs to just feels out of place for me. He would probably fit better in shadow run while destiny would be a better match nier. But again this is just me. You have proven over and over that even if I thinks your premise is stupid, you can write an interesting story with it regardless. The way you break Cannon and go off on your own way is great and interesting to see. And I look forward to seeing where this one goes.

Grumpy Wolf

But magic *does* exist in Nier Automata. - That is how scanners are hacking. - Androids cutting metallic robots effortlessly with swords is also done through magic. - Androids' combat skills are also magic: remember 2b's "rain of swords" for example. Or a2 blocking an attack with her sword from a skyscraper-sized Goliath - Devola and Popola's healing is also magic - Pods' laser beam and other attacks are magic - even making the swords disappear/reappear/floating at 2b's back is also done with magic All of them are using maso, which is just a fancy word for magic

Tau Volantis

I'm gonna be honest, I love your stories, whether I like your story concept or not. And I don't like this story concept. I prefer when crossovers are compatible with each other and can interact without breaking all of the rules for each universe. Like Metroid and halo or halo and Titanfall. To me magic and sci-fi are incompatible unless they already exist in that universe like 40K. But at the same time, I agree. I was also a victim of 2B's ass but had my heart broken by the story. I will read your story to see how you get her her happy ending. And maybe write one myself. See you next update.


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