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[Emissary] Chapter 11 - Crisis on Two Earths

🕑 Added 2024-02-21 07:19:10 +0000 UTC
[Emissary] Chapter 11 - Crisis on Two Earths

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Grumpy Wolf

Fanfiction is written while assuming that reader knows the canon material. I haven't felt the need to specifically introduce Superwoman because most people would have realized who she was (if they watched crisis on two earths movie)

Supporter

Looking through again, you name-drop Superwoman even though there has been no introduction of her, so they wouldn’t know what her name is yet. Same with Made Men. Is that just for the reader’s understanding and they don’t actually know yet or did lex Luther prime explain a bunch of their names already and I missed it?

Zai

Nice chapter but the angstiness so far is just...meh.

Supporter

I see no problem with him having some serious reservations about a relationship with someone new, especially after he’s only been on this new earth for a pretty short time… and he’s already died once here

Aidan Jones

Oh bloody hell, I really hope that relationship speedbump is smoothed over asap


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