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Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2021-08-13 02:50:09 +0000 UTC

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HereBeTreasure

I thought that ability name yelling would make it easier for readers to understand what spell is being used but didn't think about it too much changed torso -> shoulder

HereBeTreasure

changed a bit of the last paragraph

HereBeTreasure

changed nearly -> knocked out

ZaA

I feel like having 7x someone's strength and using an armor piercing ability should do way more than a third of a dudes health. He should have cleaved right through the guy. The dude is like level 8 or something? No class advancement and base stats +2.4 constitution from human+warrior levels. Even on the high end the guy has like 12 constitution vs 74 strength. Also, "The javelin pierced the mage’s torso and left a horrifying gaping hole in her shoulder," shoulder and torso are completely different parts. Torso is just the chest and stomach. One last thing.. this guy mana shifted and made his own spell in.. what, less than an hour, but he's yelling ability names still, lol? I enjoy the story, but the yelling ability names after literally manipulating mana to create a spell is just backwards

To be honest the power difference should be way higher. Hard mode + solo impossible quest vs exp share in a Forrest without prey and easy mode in the early stages And he can't knock the sword out of the guys hand? It makes no sense.

Yashakami

It's a little weird to go straight to execution and torture lol. But he did get pretty heavily betrayed and doesn't exactly have any reason to believe no one can stand up to him. And they were also pretty keen on murdering him. Thanks for the chapter! Interested in seeing how this goes.


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