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Spider-Man CYOA Page 04G Update 01
🕑 Added 2016-08-14 01:23:03 +0000 UTC Page 04G. G is for Gwen. :PAnyway, I don't want to neglect this story. I fully admit I'm not thrilled with the first three pages. I think the art is fine, but the story is really sloppy and I would love to fix it. I just don't know how, or if it's worth it.
As it stands, the whole thing is plotted out, so I have the roadmap for all the storylines, and that may just be good enough for now . :)
Gwen was the landslide winner in the voting, so we are proceeding down her path, however the next Spider-Man page after this one will probably be Page 04MJ, simply so I can promote that this is in fact a Choose Your Own Adventure where both options have a story - not just the winning selection.
After Page 04MJ, I'll continue down the Gwen path.
Also, as for the JLA story, I'm leaning heavily toward waiting until 5 or 6 pages are done before releasing them to the public. It's sort of a slow build to the sex, and I don't see how it'll gain any traction released one page per month or so (in rotation with Spidey and Superman stories).
So.....it will be a limited time PATREON EXCLUSIVE! Haha. I don't like exclusives, but y'all can see it well ahead of time, and then when enough of the story is finished to make for a decent running start to the story, I'll release them all at the same time.
I hope that makes sense. And if it does, I hope you're all good with it. If not, comments and suggestions are always welcomed!
Maybe I'll do a couple of colored speed pinups exclusively for you guys here, since it looks like outside of Superman and Black Canary, it's sort of a non-sexual period of time with the stories.
Suggestions on who you'd like me to draw? And keep in mind - these will be done relatively fast, and won't look too polished, but I don't want you to suffer with these slow pages. Lmao. ;)
**I don't want to draw anyone who is in the stories I'm already doing - Spider-Man, Venom, Superman, Green Arrow, Lois Lane, Mary Jane, etc etc.**
Comments
Ben Marxx
Thanks, Daniel! I'm always super interested to know what exactly it is that people want. Because I just draw what I want, otherwise. Haha. I have no idea who any of those people are because they're not characters in Bejeweled - the only video game I play. Lmao. But I can do an online image search! :P
Daniel Robert Clubb
Your method of completion seems fine to me as long as you are comfortable with it. Suggestions on who to draw in-between eh? Maybe... the leaders of the gyms from Pokemon go. Candela, Team Valor and a total athletic babe, Spark, Team Instinct with a fan-girl appeal and cool side, and Blanche, Team Mystic with a proper side of beauty and gender-confusing? Anyways, my input.
