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Paul's Story - Chapters 1-3
🕑 Added 2023-08-13 21:13:30 +0000 UTC*EDIT*
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And here's chapter number three. It slowly starts go get juicy now.
I'm not particularly happy with it, though. Especially the interrogation scene. I would've rather written that as a kind of flashback, where we learn about what happened before the story started from Yvette's POV, but I had a lot of trouble working Paul's questions and thoughts into that.
I'm most likely gonna change that moving forward. It also feels a little rushed at times, but I guess that's why I call these things RAW chapters.
I also added and changes a few minor details in the earlier chapters, so events that happen later on in the story won't seem like I pulled those out of my ass.
Hope you enjoy, let me know if you didn't. and I thank you all for your support!
