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Shenhe's Type (Doujinshi)

🕑 Added 2025-04-10 16:01:28 +0000 UTC
Shenhe's Type (Doujinshi)
Shenhe's Type (Doujinshi)
Shenhe's Type (Doujinshi)
Shenhe's Type (Doujinshi)

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Mogu

Yes, other creators do worse. I guess I was overthinking it. I think in all my doujinshis the guy who steals the girl is likable. I prefer it that way, and it's better if the person wants to self-insert as him. I try to build the story in a way that you can self-insert as whoever you want, even the girl. I don't know if I should give spoilers about what's going to happen to Xianyun. But if this continues the next chapter will be from her point of view. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment.

AJ

This was fantastic! Way better than I expected for sure! And I can understand why you’d think she was extra cruel but honestly I don’t think it was that bad. Like I’ve seen other creators do ntr that is wayyy more cruel than this was. If anything she was just direct but not cruel. She even broke up with him at the end so that drops it down even more by not torturing him. Also you didn’t make Khauzu a douche type of guy so your writing of him made him likeable, so I think that also take away from the cruelness. All in all I think you did great, the interactions between Shenhe and Khauzu were good, the positions were amazing, and you were also able to make his hair consistent! Thank you! Great job overall! Lastly, you do too god of a job with those cliffhangers lol. Now I’d be interested in seeing how Xianyu would react to the whole situation😭.


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