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Comics in Collaboration with Lovense (Behind-scene)
🕑 Added 2025-05-14 10:24:29 +0000 UTC*Behind the Scenes of the Lovense Collab Comic*
The comic went through a lot of changes from the original sketch to the final version. Initially, I planned a 4 page story (first sketch shown), but that idea was too long and took up too much space. To keep things tighter and more effective, I created a new plan with a shorter but still complete story.
Only the first page in the final version remains close to the original concept—with some visual improvements. The biggest changes were to pages 2 and 3:
In the first concept, what is now page 3 was originally page 2, but the scene felt too sudden. So, I added a new page 2 to build up the tension before the “fun” begins.
Page 3 was adjusted to better suit the Lovense product showcase and flow more naturally from the buildup.
Page 4 was added to wrap up the scene in a smoother, more satisfying way—since ending it at the original third page felt rushed.
The last scrapped sketch shows Bob asking Jimmy about buying toys during the Lovense discount event, but I removed it to keep things focused and streamlined.
In the end, the comic featuring Octoper and Zack was more than enough.
Thank you so much for your patience and continued support!
