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Ch1, Page 5 Sketch
🕑 Added 2023-05-05 17:43:23 +0000 UTCAll right. Here's a peek at the sketch for Page 5. Don't be worried that you missed page 4... it's just a title screen page, and it'll be uploaded before page 5 is posted. I've already finished the lines for this one, and I'm working on the colors now, so the finished page won't be too far behind.
Anyways, this is the page where the story really starts. Stellar has arisen from her dream to a mundane life, trapped inside her castle walls. She gets dressed and ventures out in the castle, to a destination unknown...
During this sequence, I'll be using the next few pages to set the stage and explore Stellar's situation inside the castle. This part is important for the setup of the rest of the story, and I'll talk a little more about that in the video log for this page.
For now I hope you enjoy seeing the sketch, and be sure to check the video in the next post too!
See you soon!
Comments
Erotibot
Ah yes. It's quite a struggle, actually. And I've seen far too many comics where speech balloon placement is all over the place, making the page confusing to read. So I always place my balloons during the sketch phase in order to make the comic pleasing to read. However, for the purpose of showing WiPs, I'll likely reserve the balloons for the finished page.
Tahldon
Really like the sketches of this page. The panels are nice and crisp and it seems as though you already have the layout planned out for everything. I know in the past, we've chatted some about your paneling and planning for speech bubbles.
