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Hot Shit High Ch.2, Pg 70
🕑 Added 2021-03-26 02:15:45 +0000 UTCMan, I struggled with this one (I hope it doesn't show!). Still not sure I'm entire happy with the layout, but I guess I learned a valuable lesson in dialog placement. Which is... always plan your page around your speech placement. In this page, I focused on making the page compositionally pleasing, but completely forgot about planning the placements for the boxes. Damn! Well, I did my best to place them around the image to allow for easy reading while also guiding the reader from one panel to the next. I tried a bunch of difference placements for the boxes but settled on something that I felt worked best (like the string of boxes following Sharlene's hair), without getting in the way of the art. I think a couple of the boxes are too close to the gutter for printing purposes, but I guess that's a problem for another day.
Oh - and the next page shouldn't take as long as this one did. The next High Res image pack will be uploaded after the following page as well.
Thanks for your support! <3
Comments
Erotibot
Hehe... all weaving was planned from the beginning. Although I'm shocked at how much the script has changed since then. Like, the story is the same, but the flow is totally different. Anyways, I'm really looking forward to finishing this thing. Not just for the sake of being done, but to look back at it and see how (or if) it all comes together.
Tahldon
This is some interesting development going on here with Sharlene. I see you, Erotibot, over here weaving complex character development in the midst of all this fine art. This page is really good also, some great, expressive poses and the flow of the dialog boxes didn't seem off at all. Thought it flowed particularly well, honestly and also contoured the action of the poses to boot.
Erotibot
The highest form of praise. Thank-you friend. I hope you and the Discord crew are doing well.
Erotibot
Bratty (but with a hidden sweet side), Overly confident (or just confident enough), Energetic, Athletic, and Fit enough for back flips. Twin-tails, and short skirt. Way too horny. Yeah, I really outdid myself...
Erotibot
Me toooo! Cheerleaders aren't explored enough! They're bendy and athletic!
Erotibot
It's probably just the old artist's self-criticism thing. That, and the fact that I spent entirely too much time messing around with their placement. Sometimes, when you look at something long enough, you're never happy, ya know? Anywho, I appreciate the vote of confidence. These things can be tricky!
Whoriar
I can't find any fault in the placement of text boxes. The way they follow Sharlenes hair is perfect and the rest is natural and unobtrusive.
Naj
I love how Sharlene can do those sexy positions.
TimParaxade
I love Sharlene so much 😭😭😭
Bronxden
Damn man im here for the art but now i want more of the story! Keep it up man
