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Hot Shit High Ch.2, Pg 60
🕑 Added 2020-09-22 00:44:04 +0000 UTCAnother experiment in paneling here, now let's see if it paid off. If it works, the eye should flow from the moment of the slap down into Sharlene's speech balloon directly below it, through the character's eyes, and then down into Marvin's "FINE!", all the way to the floor, and then back up to the insert panel.
It's always risky to ask the reader to zig-zag through a page layout like this, but I think I've figured out a way to make it work - at least when needed. In this case, I wanted to keep the characters on their respective sides in the engagement. Guiding the reader through the page is a tricky thing to do, but it makes reading the page more fun if you can pull it off.
Hope you guys like this one - more on the way!
Thanks, and lots of love for all of your support! <3
Comments
Erotibot
As well as I can be. The road over here is always rocky, but I'm feeling better each day. And you're right... there's a showdown of some sort brewing. Now to map the road ahead... fingers crossed! 🤞
Erotibot
That's funny. I kinda had that serious face that Saitama does (from One Punch Man) in mind. He goes from being this goofball, to absolute seriousness and his face will change with it. But Goku makes a pretty serious face too!
Erotibot
Thank-you You never know with these things!
Erotibot
*beats chest*
Erotibot
I do like mah womens. And I like em on top!
Erotibot
Not yet lovers.... but, rivalries on the battlefield of love, perhaps? Only one will survive!
Inquisitor
Last panel is masterful.
Tahldon
I love the fact that Marvin is so keen on his values that even balls deep in Sharlene, he's like "No, you won't bully me too!" and she slaps the taste out of his mouth and gets him back on task. The power panel at the bottom though with Marvin's closeup and the cracked letters on the ground is chef's kiss. The action in this has just been going up and up and up and now we're at final showdown. Whew, blowing us away with the panels here, man. Haha fantastic work as always. Hope you're well btw.
Sarah Hawthorne
That's an intense Goku face there at the end. I love it
KaijuWhite
So it works exactly as you hoped. Thats smart use of motion to control layout.
Kenneth Winkelman
Oh it's on like Donkey Kong! XD
Jayin
Your art style captures everything wonderful about sexy women! Man love this comic
Daikaiju
Kinda wondering if Marvin is fully in charge
ArdenW
DAYUM... that's hot...
Naj
This is gonna be an intense sex showdown between two lovers. How can they be so erotic and epic at the same time?
InkstainedFox
More pages per month!
TimParaxade
You earned that slap, Marvin.
