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[M4F] Focus on me mermaid, ride the waves of pleasure 🌊 [Mdom] [Surfer] [Point Break inspired] [Slowburn] [Teaching you how to ride waves and other things] [Teasing] [Biting] [Praise] [Good girl] [Fingering] [Intense] [Clit thumping] [Dirty talk] [Eye contact] [Fisting your hair] [Lotus Position] [Multiple listener orgasms]
🕑 Added 2021-09-19 12:00:04 +0000 UTCI'm the surf instructor teaching you the basics. You've been getting better each lesson. A big wave comes in and I get you onto it, shouting and encouraging you all the way. At the Friday night party, my buds confront me about you, why are you so special to me. I cant put it into words but, I know it when I'm with you, you're not just the rad chick I'm teaching, I feel it in the way your lips part, your eyes blaze and your heart hammers through your chest. By the shore, you're saving some baby sea turtles and it isn't long before I have you wrapped in my arms in your wetsuit, gone are the pretences of instructor and student. Of course, the odd bit of teasing is not going to cut it mermaid, I need a passionate night with you tonight where we can ride very different kinds of waves together.
This script was written by Snoooza! Much love and appreciation to her for this. This script was also the first one where we have worked with an external SFX editor to hopefully start making these a much more immersive experience for you.
VA: Mr. Holmes
![[M4F] Focus on me mermaid, ride the waves of pleasure 🌊 [Mdom] [Surfer] [Point Break inspired] [Slowburn] [Teaching you how to ride waves and other things] [Teasing] [Biting] [Praise] [Good girl] [Fingering] [Intense] [Clit thumping] [Dirty talk] [Eye contact] [Fisting your hair] [Lotus Position] [Multiple listener orgasms]](https://img10.leakoo.com/storage/7/gs/rv/93d9f0-019e806e-2b8f-74cf-b0b0-c0dd5319463b.png)
Comments
Cynicl68
Whoa. The laid back calm confidence in the VA’s voice… I’m posting a comment and I’m only halfway through.
Antoinette
I need to know what happened. This was so good.
LuckyPenguin
Oh that is such a good one 💜
Grace
That feminine urge to ride Mr. Holmes until he goes blind for a few minutes and let him blow another big, sticky load in us.. 🤤😍🌊
PixiIvy Dust
Really liked this one but the ending does seem like you are leaving it open for another
Stephanie
I’m with the girl above me. Perfect VA for this script 😍💜
Raisin Girl
This is my first time posting, I just found BKS 2 weeks ago, and I just wanted to share how much I enjoyed this audio. The open ending leaves so much potential for further development of these characters and honestly begs for a continuation. The SFX were very well done and it's obvious how much effort is being made to improve the overall quality of your audios. As for the script, I personally loved it. Yes, Surfer is a softer Dom, but there should be room for that dynamic to be included in the BKS catalogue alongside the more traditional "Master/Sir" type Dom stories. He was still in control, he just expressed himself differently. Mermaid is very independent, a real go-getter. Surfer Dom is her perfect foil. It's because of his gentler nature that she actually listens and follows his instructions because he's taken the time to build her trust and uses positive encouragement to motivate her to always give her best, in all things. Even during sex. Even when she doesn't fully understand how she's supposed to achieve the greatness she's searching for by using his methods. The payoff, of course, is that he knows what he's doing and he wants to share his knowledge with her, to show her how to make the best of every experience, including the sex. The Lotus position was inspired. It fit perfectly with the mermaid/surfer/riding-the-waves theme of the story, and it was true to Surfer Dom's personality. Mermaid's reaction was also completely in-line with what we know of her. Not to mention, it's a sex position which isn't used nearly often enough in erotic audio. It felt fresh and authentic to the characters, and it was sexy as hell. Surfer Dom was trying so hard to communicate with Mermaid on more than just a sexual level. The intimacy of the Lotus position is practically made for this type of emotionally and physically intense encounter, and worked beautifully here. Mr. Holmes was the PERFECT VA for this story! It obviously helped that the dialogue felt real. But more importantly was Mr. Holmes gentler tone and sincere delivery. You could sense the strong attraction and also the underlying caring. Completely true to nature for Surfer Dom. What an incredibly seductive voice! I know there's NO WAY I could resist a Dom like that. Fantastic work here, Mr. H!!! 😘 The only downside is the abrupt ending which I hope means there will be a sequel because this story definitely deserves to be explored further. Thank you for taking the time to get to know your listeners and for always striving to provide quality content. Keep up the amazing work! It's so greatly appreciated! 🥰
Best Kept Secret
Thanks for the feedback Natalie I'll pass that on. Me and Alexis have been busy and stepped away from writing recently but we are back on some scripts in the next week or two. And it happens occasionally, not all stories will be hits!
Natalie Nandahar
Very good job with SFX! Mr. Holmes also was wonderful, but unfortunately it's another script with which I feel disappointed recently. I am sorry to write this, but unfortunately the stories written by this author are on a much lower level than the previous ones. And till now I loved almost everything 😔
Best Kept Secret
Thanks glad the SFX added to it
RoRo_62
Well done script and sound effects! Loved it.
