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Metallover's Self Insert Adventure Book 3 ch1

🕑 Added 2020-06-17 16:37:58 +0000 UTC

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metalloverben

I think it’s less about ‘forgiveness’ and more about understanding. We’ll see how that all plays out, but I can guarantee their relationship won’t be the same way it was before

metalloverben

Rice and I both worked very hard on the mood and tone of this chapter, so I’m glad to hear you thought it was good. And yes, Archer is indeed a good boy

Kastor

Yeah, well I legit cannot wait to read chapter 2 haha! This is a strong start to the next lot of events. I appreciate that you didn't rush into the Valm campaign and especially not have Chrom just be a-ok with Ben after the timeskip. Wasn't all that many funny moments but there were some good ones, and it overall worked well. I actually felt almost disappointed we weren't getting to Emmeryn in the chapter but probably better to spread things out a bit. Also, Archer is best boy; you best not let him get hurt >:|