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Chapter 287: Honest and Breathing

🕑 Added 2024-09-16 10:55:00 +0000 UTC

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Nick Roman

Dear god they're playing cultivator Monopoly. Excellent

Robert Davidson

If he can't keep up his usual quality on that schedule, hell no. If he can, though. . .

MasterofNova

I've thought long and hard about cultivation speeds in this story for months and have come to the conclusion that the speed of prodigies are always inconsistent. It can take some people centuries to reach the True or Earth realm if we take Elder Xun's statement about how quickly he's grown to heart. However, it inherently requires someone to be talented to reach those stages to begin with as Nascent realm is the average cap of growth. From the representatives of the EFC as well as Xiao Nan all being in the Earth realm during the times they were competing it seems like a consistent trend for prodigies to reach the Earth realm in their teens. While Mat said fatal competition consistently trims their number i'd guess that either the True or Earth realm is where they hit bottlenecks that are typically non-existent for mcs in Xianxia but like heart devils, are often a threat to the side characters. Great prodigies like Xiao Nan and Feng Zhou probably don't get hit by any of these road blocks in their path to eternity so they consistently advance despite their youth. With all that said, I think there probably is another rule that keeps Heaven realms from competing, which could have probably kept Feng Zhao from advancing earlier in order to participate.

Teral Hilliard

Feel free to use this as the "I would be willing to pay 15$ for a two chapters a week schedule." button. Mat can't say no to all of us, his Storyteller's Dao wouldn't allow it.

Jasus

It was a good chapter and Feng Zhuo is an entertaining character but did Xiao Shuang talk have to be skippt?

Blahful

Board games were common in all ancient civilizations AFAIK.

Gardor

I feel like that tournament being five years ago, as in it was just the last tournament before the most recent one that was sabotaged by sect politics, would throw off the timeline a little bit. Just like, how long it takes to get to heaven tier level 5, and how old people are. And how powerful people can be in the tournament. I feel like there shouldn't be Heaven level participants in the tournament, at least not if the failed members we've seen are any indication, and therefore he would have had to get to Heaven level five in five years. Cultivation should start slowing down as you advance. Also, if he said "if you want to win the tournament, I have the qualifications to teach you, because I won the tournament" that's one thing. It's a silly thing, but it can sort of make sense. But "you're planning on attending the tournament, I can help cuz I won the tournament" makes it seem like attending the tournament is what Liu Jin needs help with, which is why I'm suggesting changing some words around. Him "attending" is not up for debate, he's a politically important disciple who's wildly talented. "Planning to take part in the tournament." "I can help cuz I'm a former tournament winner", because "taking part" has more of a competitive implication than the more neutral "attending". That's just one suggestion. Even just saying "I'd be a fantastic training partner" would be a better option, I think. But you're 100 percent correct I am definitely over thinking it, this one word choice does not matter.

MasterofNova

While I get what ur saying I feel like ur overthinking it. It's just his credentials. Him being a winner is what verifies his status as the greatest prodigy of his generation and inherently makes him more worthy of mentoring our boy. Other than Bai Wen there is no one more qualified for the job who isn't an Emperor. Also the tournament he won was about 5 years ago in world.

David Wei

"would you be leaving now" -> should be "will you be leaving now"

El Caso Es

"Feng Zhi might have thoroughly failed or perhaps succeeded too quickly," broooooo. This cracked me up again 20 minutes later after reading this

Gardor

Yes but that's not because he's a tournament winner, that's almost irrelevant to anything Feng Zhou could provide. That's why I think it's a non-sequitur. He can help Jin get in to the tournament cuz of his position in the sect, which isn't dependent on tournament winning. (The only reason I mention this as a motivation is that it's phrased "you want to attend", as if that's Jin's goal he's offering assistance with, not "you want to win"). He can help train Liu Jin cuz he's an experienced cultivator, which also isn't based on him winning the tournament however many years ago. In fact, lots of people around Liu Jin could be training buddies and mentors, and they didn't win the tournament.

Martin Toder

But he can still teach him a lot. Jin hasn't had a sparring partner in a while, and Feng Zhuo can help him hone his Dao.

Gardor

"Did you know he was one of the representatives of the Eternal Flame Clan in the Storm Dragon Empire..." “Now, you are just trying to make yourself look bad.” “You have succeeded at that far beyond anything I could accomplish,” Big Sister Bai replies. -> "trying to make 'me' look bad"? How does that statement reflect on Bai, and why would she have admitted Feng Zhou succeeded at making her look bad in that tone? "Your Majesty plans to attend the Crimson Cloud Tournament, right?” “There is a tournament winner right here!” -> so what? Does a winner of tournament have any weight behind who gets selected to attend the tournament? And if it's "I can teach you how to win" type situation, how? They share no techniques and he'll be fighting different people, and also, he knows how to fight in tournaments it's xianxia world. Just seems almost like a non-sequitur, for the big finale of the chapter.

Silverias

I think literal shamelessness is important to his dao. He literally cannot bring shame to himself or it will damage him somehow

Prometheus

You say this while Jin has yet to pick up the dice...

Nathan Ganesan

They're playing fucking LIFE.

Valerian

As an older brother I provide my seal of approval to Feng Zhou. He is late, but he is settling into his new role with aplomb

G K

Loving Feng Zhuo here. A monster indeed. Side note: This is what makes me stick with the story despite its snail's pacing - great characters & greater writing.

sapassde .

There may be more to his reasons beyond what he said here but I'd like to think he's honest here, no reason to limit his motives for coming to the SDE to only 1. It's nice to see that Liu Jin now will have someone instructing him like how Xiao Nan did it over 200+ chapters ago.

HolySin

So Feng Zhuo has a luck of a typical cultivation harem protaganist? Now I am starting to doubt how is the main character right here.

Tobias Hammeken Arboe

No, I actually like him even better now I think. Damn, truly a prodigy indeed

Martin Toder

Damn, what a character. He's worthy of his title as 'Most annoying cultivator of his generation'

Sean Duggan

Hi, ty for chapter, just wanted to share that there are multiple instances of name changing from Feng Zhuo to Feng Zhou throughout the chapter


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