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Chapter 120: I Thought Long and Hard about It

🕑 Added 2021-05-10 12:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Sickul

And one is Qing Jin? different ways to write this but I think "Which is Qing Jin?" is likely what is meant

David Wei

"You'd do well to fix" needs an "it" at the end.

irradiation

1. Turnabout is fair play. Liu Jin and Lu Mei had their fun, now it’s Bei Hong and Huang Shing’s turn to speak up if Feng Gui’s faction falters. Though as the Spartans say, “if”. 2. “Her” Qing Jin? Quite an interesting choice of words there Lu Mei. I imagine Xiao Shuang and Song Daiyu will have a few objections to that however. 3. Bei Hong again. In my mind, I picture him kind of mildly like Iskandar from Fate /Zero with his clan technique and his very straightforward outlook on life like in the Night Phantasm City fight and with him joining up with Feng Shang’s faction to help a martial friend and to fulfill his desire to fight both Lu Mei and Liu Jin, I guess my mental analogy comes full circle. Still, as much as I like Bei Hong, the ox-headed battle addict stereotype is absolute trouble. I hope this doesn’t end in tears like in F/Z. 4. Elder Xue fairy dancing on Liu Jin’s berserk button and Liu Jin not lashing out is character development. Granted, Elder Xue is not quite as bad as Ruan Gotin, but it seems Liu Jin is taking his master’s words about virtue and vice and flaws to heart. 5. “Far more trouble than you can bear?” You don’t know the half of it, lady. 6. With the mention of Huang Shing, I wonder what Feng Zhi feels about this turn of events. And Feng Hao for that matter. 7. Minor typo: The period after “Chides him, really.” doubled up.

Kiwilord

Lu Mei is #1


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