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Notice of Break

🕑 Added 2023-06-17 11:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Bat

I would like to see some POV from Jaina in what she plans to do now that she has a book detailing events that would of happened. Also very curios about the “sun elves” or whatever they plan to call themselves after this.

Rubeno

That reminds me of how Viv gets strong a little bit too fast. It makes sense for her as MC partner yet she studied monk ways only just recently and without a monk teacher. In comparison, MC or Jaina studied since early childhood and had the best teachers they could get. Even then MC is yet underpowered in comparison to if she was reincarnated as Kaldorei. Maybe some justification for her growth would be good. I mean maybe labeling her as a "genius " or having an extraordinary affinity for let's say water? I'm not sure frankly about Viv whether it's a good idea. It's frankly not that much of a problem since she is MC partner but still.

Vojtěch Martinec

Gwen´s had, in the 11th chapter posted today, a sort of realization that while there are no heroes in Gilneas roster, she has to step up. Because she remembers who the heroes are. I guess what i would like to see is a formerly not very significant or just not very heroic character ascending to become "A hero" so to speak. A significant, powerful mover and shaker. Someone who Gwen doesn´t know or wouldn´t expect to, getting blindsided and disabused of the notion that this story only has a set amount of heroes that she knows properly. I don´t know if thats in the cards (thought i would expect it is, Vivi is shaping up quite the badass), but thats kinda a beat that i would like to see being shown.


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