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Astra - CG Adjustments on Patreon Feedback
🕑 Added 2022-10-01 21:08:52 +0000 UTCHello Patrons,
Looks like we have a double post today!! This one is to showcase some of the CG adjustments that we made based on your feedback. We'll have the original CG displayed, along with the notes for the update, and what the new version looks like.
Let's get started!
Vaela & BeepBoop
The note we got for this one was that Vaela's eyes felt a bit like it was missing something, as if it was still kind of a sketch. What we did was update her eyes with more details and reflection while still keeping that anime surprise look. Another note was the hand was just a bit too small for her overall frame, we scaled it up just a tad bit!
Luna Exotic Outfit
For this one, we received feedback that her back felt like it was too much of a right angle bend and didn't feel right. The artwork without the hair had the right shape but how the hair flowed made it look like it wasn't curved properly. We adjusted her hair going more diagonally and showing just a bit of detail on her back (can mainly see it on her upper strap).
Iris Foot Massage
Feedback for this one was that Iris is a petite lady however the foot felt a bit flat. What we did was adjust the angle to make it more curvy and the scale to make it more dainty. The other note was that she had a non-reaction while being touched which didn't transition well to her other expressions so we made the non-reaction as a new frame without touch (expressions will be the same as before!).
Luna Tie Up
So this one was more of an adjustment because of the scene context. Luna was being a bit too ecchi whereas the event is suppose to be humorous and her second expression was more to convey a 'you really are enjoying this aren't you?' instead of 'we about to have some fun'. We reduced her sultry points and gave her a bit more of a sass!
Those were all the CGs we adjusted based on feedback! Firstly, thank you for providing these notes as having collective opinions helps us not work in our silos. Second, while they may appear as small changes, I think this level of polish will help Astra reach that next level as a benchmark!
As always, feel free to share your thoughts below, did you like these changes, no preferences...etc.
Thanks again! :^)
