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Upload Notes: Goddess from the Deep Part I
🕑 Added 2021-08-27 06:44:17 +0000 UTCI've been pretty excited to share this story with you guys, so I'm relieved it's finally here~ I've thought quite a bit about Goddess from the Deep ever since it's been requested. It's a concept that seems fairly straightforward, but I think the twist at the end/next part gives it a very fun edge.
It kinda makes it hard to talk about without spoiling what's ahead, haha. I assume if you're reading these notes, you probably read the full story, but there's still a bit of what's ahead to reveal to you guys. I have to admit, part one is a little slow, but I guarantee it picks up next time! The stage is set for some fun, and I hope you guys have some questions to dwell on while the next part comes together.
As it is, I don't have much to talk about with this part of the story, but I hope the twist at the end captures some attention! It felt like things clicked in my head when I figured out how to play with that "from the Deep" aspect, the idea of this space-person posing as a goddess that comes out from some mysterious forest. In hindsight, I see places where I could have made the ritual more engaging and full of details -- I originally included food, wine, and other offerings as part of the sacrifice that the goddess takes -- but I decided to focus on the characters and their story, deciding to speed through those smaller, less important details.
Well, hope you guys enjoy the read and look forward to the conclusion~ Really appreciate the support from everyone! Thank you thank you~
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arris
Omitting the other things in the ritual was the better choice, I feel. The focus was kept on the people and the value of the life that is taken. Which fits with Vivian's name.~ The goddess didn't concern themselves with other things and honed in on the people so them prepping and making things for the ritual in the hopes of it being taken would be moot. I had a feeling that the ending of this part would be like this! But there is still room for mysteries and answers, most definitely.
