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🕑 Added 2021-02-07 10:04:56 +0000 UTCThis story comes from suggestions made by my girlfriend~ Just a quick something-something I put together in a few days! You all might recall that my girlfriend is the one who originally asked for Discovery, and she helps me do a lot of planning with it. Great of a story as that one is, it's also very grounded -- doesn't allow for fun, random stuff to happen. You know, fun random stuff like vore and loud belly noises~
There's a lot of noises in this one! It made for an interesting challenge, incorporating so many sounds without trying to make it too overbearing on the reader. It's hard to get across that a sound is constantly happening without being repetitive, usually. I think I handled it pretty well here~ A good variety of stomach noises, none of them seemed too off-putting for the context!
More than my usual stories, there's quite a bit of vore here too, and with some decent emotion behind it. I enjoyed writing out that scene where Kate eats Elisha, it's heartbreaking and so terrible. Kate is just that desperate to think eating a doctor would help her, even though she doesn't even want to. It's a tragic dynamic, ideally makes the sense of someone being eaten feel heavy. In the world of vore stories, it can be easy to make the vore itself feel too casual or even funny, so striking that right chord where there's just enough logic and realism behind it, mm.
That's about it to say about Bellyache~ It'll go public in a week! And stay tuned for an update about the Patreon! I've got some things coming together that you all will definitely want to know about~ Thank you all so much for the support! Hope you enjoy this week's story~
Comments
Adam Nahod
Whoops. I may have deleted your comment by accident on mobile. If that's the case, my bad~
Adam Nahod
We met online through this shared interest~ We're both writers and had very similar tastes, now we've been together for six years! Very very fortunate, haha.
Shaman
arris
She has wonderful ideas! Definitely gotta listen to her whenever you can (which is always.)
