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Upload Notes: Discovery Part VI
🕑 Added 2020-12-15 07:51:10 +0000 UTCFinally, a new update to Discovery! Thank you all for waiting as long as you did. I know this is a highly anticipated story for most of the patrons here, and I've been working hard these last few months trying to crack at this particular part of the narrative. If you haven't read it yet, go give it a whirl and you'll probably be able to tell why exactly I had so many hang-ups and delays, haha~
The basics of it is that this chapter didn't have much room, thematically, for pretty much ANY size content. At least, not the size content we've come to expect~ This was a pretty dramatic part of the story where things turn gloomy just after an exciting spike in emotions. It might seem like a big change of pace after the last part, where Duval and Sierra enjoyed a free and sexy night together, but this chapter tests their relationship by pitting them against the lab's obstacles.
Parts of this drama were, aha, more fun to write than others. The best part was the argument at the end, when the dialogue was finally allowed to flow without so many hesitations. Finally could they speak and get these feelings out. Everywhere else, there were so many restrictions in what I could possibly have them even do, which led to stunted sections where Duval and Sierra couldn't do much with each other. It was also difficult trying to come up with a situation where they could interact just enough, while still keeping up a somewhat realistic idea of how a lab would function.
But honestly, I think realism here has been my biggest hang-up. My problem is that, you might've guessed this, I'm no scientist. So the environment of scientistry and the world of scienceness, it's all very weird to me and I end up stumbling over the setting I've made for myself. I've created a pretty compelling universe (I like to think) that succeeds because of how real the consequences of things are, but I find myself struggling to keep that reality consistent and relatable. I always feel like I'm going to, like, write something embarrassing about science~ It's a silly fear, but it's part of what slows me down.
I don't think there's much else to say here. I hope that ending leaves you all anticipating a fun new part to the story next time! I've got some ideas for sure, but let me know in the replies what you thought of this part~ Part six here will go fully public in a week, so enjoy the exclusivity while it lasts! Thank you all for your patience and support~
Comments
Adam Nahod
The next part is in the works~ Discovery parts tend to be quite long so expect a few months between additions.
Juan Gomez
Does anyone know if this series is going to be continued? I just started reading and it looks like it hasn't been updated in a while
arris
They've advanced enough to be able to shrink people, so some leeway is allowed. I can buy the environment of scientistry and the scienceness you have presented, as it is allowing the drama to take place and hook me in.
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