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Upload Notes: The Witch's Demon Part II
🕑 Added 2021-03-29 08:56:15 +0000 UTCSorry for these being a bit late! I intended to write this up the day after the upload, but I got distracted and just, never really had the second to sit down and write upload notes. But here I am~
It was exciting to return to this setting! A patron came up to me regarding a very similar premise, and was on board with using Bree and Fyrellith for what they wanted. I love when stuff like that can work out~ These two were a lot of fun in the original, so I hope people enjoy them in this unexpected sequel. It's cathartic to get here! I remember wanting to do this premise right after the original was posted, a sequel where Fyrellith gets to be the big one, and now it exists!
As requested, there was more an emphasis this time around on stomping/footplay. In hindsight, I could have taken the ideas a bit further, and maybe structure things a bit more fluidly. In general ahhh a lot of the plot here depends on Bree being forced to not speak Fyre's name. All the while I was writing this, I kept wondering if that gimmick was too silly or not, ahah, but I did come around to enjoying it and what it added. I tried to highlight that Bree was also into the role subversion, she enjoyed being overpowered, but again... in hindsight, maybe I could have been clearer with that. I feel like I lost Bree's perspective a bit in the goings of this, just sort of in general.
I'm sure more adventures await these two~ Maybe we'll get a building-sized Fyre next, or perhaps Bree wants to make the tiniest succubus possible. Going forward, I really really want to emphasize the demonic connection between them. It's supposed to be something that grows stronger over time; I want Bree to be corrupted, that'd be so hot, right? A nerdy witch girl becoming obsessed with lust and desire like some sort of... occultic bimboification. Hell yeah! Hah... Hell. That wasn't even intentional.
Okay, I think that about wraps up my thoughts, since this was a pretty quick story. Let me know if you guys want to read more about these two! Maybe I'll take more time out of my schedule to give them another story. Thanks for the support everyone~
