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🕑 Added 2020-04-12 06:03:19 +0000 UTCIt's taken several months, but I've finally got this story wrapped up and concluded~ Frozen 2 seemed so recent when I began this one, and now it feels so far away. Between then and now, for one, there's been a whole pandemic. So when you read the first half of this story, think of it being written by a Cursey from a simpler time.
Maybe that's why I like the beginning half way more than the second half. Hah, I'm always negative about my work~ but I do really prefer the setup to the story rather than the sexual second half. There were more opportunities to really immerse the reader into Nikki's shoes, it felt like the start to a borrower-themed story. Things like the candles and the jar just sold that sensation better than when things got steamier.
I tried to capture Elsa's sexuality true to her character, which meant I couldn't just turn her into my usual type of girl -- you know, "oh fuck is that a tiny? Boom boom boom here I come." I wanted to show she has reservations and anxieties, but that it was her fantasy to let that all go (ha!) and embrace the kind of domination she wanted. In the end, I do think that makes for a less intensive sex scene, but hopefully it reflects Elsa more accurately to how one would imagine her to be. I didn't exactly do "research" into Elsa porn, but just from what I gleamed from others, it felt like most people really ditch Elsa's personality in favor of her iconic looks. There's a lot of Elsa porn, you know, it's easy to see in passing.
This is going to remain a patreon exclusive story! So only true fans get access to this one. I hope you all enjoy it, let me know what you think~ Thanks again to Nikki for requesting this story, and thank you to all my other patrons for sticking with me~
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arris
Oh you, your usual type of girl isn't boom-boom tiny, you got more nuance than that. It does show that you weren't just about to write about someone who looks like her doing size stuff. It felt like a plausible version. Most works do ditch the personalities of the characters at times, but I did not see that here. I wouldn't say the first part could pass for a Borrower-themed story though. Once Nikki gains her perspective she knows the reason for her situation in Hilda rather than how a Borrower operates. And as a reader I found myself liking both the building up and the letting go of this story going from concealing and not feeling to feeling and freeing.
