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Upload Notes: Competition
🕑 Added 2020-03-30 08:32:36 +0000 UTCSorry for the lil' delay on these upload notes~ I wanted to get that story out fast, and I managed to do so at the last minute. Didn't have time to ramble, and boy, I'm here to ramble!
Competition was a fun short to write~ Pokemon Sword and Shield introduced tons of great characters, and the DLC went and upped that by one more. Bea and Nessa are extremely cool characters, then Klara just gets included like it's no big deal. I had to take some liberties with her personality~ It isn't as though we know much about her. Some guesses were made about how she would act and what she even does in her normal life, so I miiiiiiiiiiiiight have geared her a little towards my interests...................... heh...
What the fuck is wrong with me and having photos taken of shrunken women? I've literally never had any interest in those thoughts until I started writing. I guess it just feels so natural to do~ Who wouldn't take pics of some tinies they found? Maybe someone with any level of compassion. It's such an embarrassing circumstance, a simple way to humiliate someone. I dunno! It'll probably come up again in another work of mine. I mean, I even explained that it was a rotom phone. Rotom! If I can write something sexy including a fucking rotom phone, I don't think anything can stop me.
Anyway. I've had this specific idea in my head for quite awhile, that Bea and Nessa shrink to Klara's poison, and then Melony gets involved having taken the antidote. If you follow me on twitter, you might have seen me discuss it a couple times. I'm glad with some support from a patron, I could get this written up! It came out pretty nice, though I definitely see the places where I rushed. It was my intent to get this thing out before the end of the month, help make up for the dry amount of content this month. SS&SC isn't everyone's cup of tea and part II was not very sexy, so I wanted to include something that was more familiar, easier to digest, and was in fact quite sexy.
One of the places where I rushed was the setup. The way it's written now, Bea and Nessa were just randomly training together. In hindsight, I should have arranged things to be like an on-going tournament. It would better justify why all the characters are in one place, for starters. Beyond that, it would have made Nessa and Bea's brief interactions a little more impactful, and I could have justified Klara's experiment as being her sneaky way of eliminating competition. The current setup I went with... isn't bad, but it leads to some weird thoughts. Like, Klara just left some poison in a cooler, just to shrink and abuse some people basically, and then she walks off to just, return them to normal... I mean, as far as size fetish stories go, that's a perfectly fine arrangement, quick and simple. But it would have had better connections with the theme of "competition" had the atmosphere been more, well, competitive. I could have also included a stadium full of people to interact with during Melony's growth, but, it had to be cut short to end anyway.
I do have a sequel in mind that continues where things left off~ Melony is also a favorite of mine, I'd love to write something about her stomping around Galar. That's probably gonna have to wait a little bit, but we'll see if there's any interest~ So few of the SwSh girls have size content, Melony in particular. I think her mommy nature would go well with being giant, she'd probably want to pick up her hometown and snuggle with it...
Hope you guys enjoyed it! My first pokemon size story without Hex Maniac, can you believe it? I feel like I need to make a Hex story to make up for it. Well, thanks for reading if you did~ Thanks for all the support, everyone! Stay healthy!
