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Update - Emi bathroom follow up
🕑 Added 2021-08-15 22:00:05 +0000 UTCtl;dr - I'm developing the Emi/Shizu threesome scenes.
This week's image
I'm including another follow-up from this scene since it's what I've been working on lately. I quite like how her expression turned out here.
I've also included a couple of things I put on the Discord this week - sitting next to Emi and Shizu, one on either side at the bar.
Developing the Emi/Shizu scenes
The Emi/Shizu scenes were a little tricky for me to crack at first, but I think they're turning out in a narratively satisfying form. These, like all the threesome scenes, are a chance to take another look at the characters and the basic story in a way that I haven't actually done in a while, so I have to remind myself that as always - the blank page isn't an enemy, it's an opportunity.
For one thing, I haven't really talked enough about how Emi's fame defines the relationship. It came up a lot in the early parts of the story and I don't want all of her story to revolve around it - it's good that I turned away from that and dealt with her just as a person, rather than a celebrity after her introductory stages - but I also feel like that shouldn't just be forgotten. There's still details to be explored and ways in which it affects the relationships with her.
Quick update this week, even though I've been hard at work. What do you think of the plan to get into the Emi/Shizu scenes? Let me know in the comments!
Comments
BBBen
That's not the only part she can communicate with.
Hank Rillek
Shizu can say so much with her eyes!
