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Pervert Action: Origins beta
🕑 Added 2015-06-16 14:10:02 +0000 UTC EDIT: I have updated this with the latest version - 003 - that EFon has created, improved based on suggestions from version 002.What a busy time - the first alpha of my new game Let Me In has come out (and the next version will be out soon) and now I've got something else for you!
Some of you may be aware that one of my online friends, EFon, is writing a prequel story to the Pervert Action series called Pervert Action: Origins. This is a choose-your-own-adventure story which he has partially presented before, but since then I have gone through it with him (with me as the player in a live AIF) and he has developed it a lot more. Just recently he has taken advantage of the Twine revolution and built the story into Twine, creating a full on PAO choose your own adventure game.
He has a beta version ready, and here's what he had to say about it:
"it's still at only 75% written, so 25% mostly in the Jealousy, Vanity, and Sloth trees are just "X,Y,Z happens" filler. But I'm looking for bugs, typos, and if I'm missing any good hentai tropes. I've really tried to cover all the bases, and I've never written horror-sex before so I don't know if is coming off as intended. I want it half funny, half scary, but all arousing."
Based on that, I'm making it available here for you guys to play. This isn't one of my games, so I'm not making the beta exclusive to only the $10 backers. EFon needs some feedback on this, but I have managed to get him to give you guys (all patrons) exclusive beta testing access!
He'll need honest, critical feedback, or even just corrections of typos and bugs. You can post stuff here and I'll pass it along; you can send feedback to me at bbben.aif@gmail.com or you can send it directly to him at mpendergast4@gmail.com
The game is attached as a download (I'm testing the Patreon download system). If that doesn't work I'll soon attach a google drive link.
Comments
BBBen
Note, I've just added the updated version, 003.
Hank Rillek
Send the first part of feedback. It's a large story, so it takes a lot of time to go through it all.
Hank Rillek
I'll look into this and will sent feedback to EFon.
