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🕑 Added 2024-02-19 07:15:21 +0000 UTC

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Jesus Cardenas

I plan to focus the story more on the military, realistically expanding on how the world has protected itself all these years. Chapter 1 saw how a special forces team was eliminated by a ghost, Kiran's own father. The story is going to take a darker path, I will use new tools that will be seen in the next chapters.

Ethan132

That was chilling. You can’t leave it hanging now. To be honest you have a gift for writing mystery type books. This one felt a lot more intense with the heavily first person writing and descriptive gaps left to the readers imagination. I like it for different reasons than priest, I wouldn’t say I have a favourite between the two but then again I’ve read 30 chapters of one and 5 of the others. So I’ll reserve judgement for now. But awesome book so far. Excited for what comes next 😁 will be interested to hear your more modern take on dealing with anomalies. I liked the CBRN reference and the very cold hearted containment of the student. Were you planning highly tech gadgets or specialist tech or is it more of a, against the inevitable tide of death situ going on?


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