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Book 2 | Chapter 31

🕑 Added 2025-05-20 14:27:20 +0000 UTC

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Christopher Silvestro

Thanks for the feedback. I'll make a margin note for when I revisit things for an edit sweep. I think if I were to add anything, I could find something a bit slower to add before this one, but generally speaking I probably won't be adding too much to this scene itself. If I pad out action scenes too much it starts detracting from them, I think, especially for single exchanges like this.

TeDureShi

Hmm idk, alot happend in such a short chapter. I feel like you should either add more words so it flows more. Or cut these scenes into multiple chapters. The sense is enhanced because last chapter was also very fast paced


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