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Center Stage - Chapter 35

🕑 Added 2024-07-30 17:55:53 +0000 UTC

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David Howe

Excellent chapter, can't wait to see the aftermath (I estimate that'll take two chapters). One suggestion: In the second to last paragraph, add "when the door [burst open and Jean rushed] in..." I wouldn't use the word "exploded," as that word was used when the attacker came out of the bathroom.

D.J. Clarke

Maybe ID the person comignin the door? I was just looking back to Kat, to see if she’d gotten a hold of anyone, when the door exploded in, gun drawn.

Terence Coughlin

Wow, now let's hope the wound is not serious. Some more notoriety won't hurt further sales either

James Bartling

Excellent chapter

D.J. Clarke

Hanna kind of shrugged, but I could see the glow. Even after so many people telling her she did great at the Olympics, she was still uncomfortable with the attention. err... should be Kat?


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