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Center Stage - Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2024-06-22 13:09:00 +0000 UTC

Comments

Phil

I like your character images. I would have agreed with Alina image based on her initial chapters. However, it seems too "cold" after the way you have her become a friend to Kat and the others in the more recent chapter. Isn't it interesting how the reader's mental image of a character can change based on however the story line goes?

Phil

I'm enjoying this last book of Charlie's story. We have discussed this before, but I'm really going to miss him. I could envision at least one more book with a faster pace. I would be interested in following Charlie through college or however much of it he actually attends, see him become a true star, and see how his relationship with Kat turns out. Oh well...

Idaho Spud56

Good chapter. Glad to see things working out on the music front for Charlie. Looking forward to how things get resolved for Hannah. New chapter tomorrow? LOL.

James Bartling

I smell a rat on Hannas commitment. I bet someone is going to find the hidden from public reports and evidence. I liked how Charlie stepped in to get her found. I'm glad Charlie has finally found a home in the music industry where he is appreciated. Thanks for another great chapter, your writing in this story has been great and truly enjoyable.

Whicked

1.4 M? Damn I should have learned how to write the songs I love to play


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