Travis Starnes
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Update to Fanfare - Chapter 26
🕑 Added 2021-11-01 16:16:55 +0000 UTCIf you've read Chapter 26 of Fanfare before today, go back and re-read at least the last third, as there has been a major rewrite of that section completely changing one of the building sub-plots.
Comments
Kim Biel-Nielsen
Significantly better - I like it
Travis Starnes
Good. I think so too.
Rocketman
I like the rewrite better. It feels more natural than the blackmail version. Good work.