Elephant Town Chapter 11 (pages 1-2)
🕑 Added 2022-04-04 04:02:10 +0000 UTC

Props to all the former Maria's workers who filled me in on kitchen details so this would feel like, y'know, a kitchen.
I'd say "never again" to drawing shelves of to-go boxes and bags of onions, but... well, next week's pages. *falls to the floor*
Comments
Danielle Corsetto
I was REALLY happy to send this to my friends who used to work at this restaurant, and my friend Jon was like "nailed the busted ipod." I pulled that one out of my ass, I didn't even know they used an iPod!
Steve Boyko
I love the detail of the ancient iPod with the cracked screen. So many little touches like this.
Danielle Corsetto
THANK YOU that means a lot! Next scene is an actual cafe, so I hope that one meets your approval too!
Sky
As someone who worked in a cafe kitchen, you succeeded 😁
Minzoku Bokumetsu
because you have to DRAW EVERYTHING (or not, but too late to go full minimalist and not have the abrupt style change look weird haha)
Mitchell Sealy
Yeah, that's the Mathew. Thank you.
Dean Reilly
Matthew who used to be Paul? He doesn't work in a restaurant, he's a phone tech support rep.
Danielle Corsetto
Beat me to it, thank you!
GARRR!! You strike me through the heart, bringing to mind my much-missed 2nd gen iPod Nano! I doubt I will see its like again, outside this comic. :-(
Mitchell Sealy
Mathew doesn't work here, right? Didn't look like a restaurant he worked at, I don't think. So he's probably not making a spectacle of himself with his new persona. This is something else they're seeing.
Sabrina
oooh all those DETAILS!!! i didnt even register the “rip” also being…a rip at first, such a cool effect!
Ruth Merriam
Ohh, right right right.
William Cole
That isn't Berto's hand in the iPod panels, so I think the metal belongs to a coworker.
Ruth Merriam
B is a metalhead? No. I'm not buying that. I was utterly swept into the world of burritoville and frying chips. I could hear that hustle and rrrrriiIIPPP. And then his mellow was harshed with a yank. Why, dude? It had better be worth it. Ah, but it's Danielle. It will TOTALLY be worth it.
Danielle Corsetto
Coming from you that has some WEIGHT, background champ!!
Danielle Corsetto
Oh we will, and it'll be worth the... um, 4-5 month wait?? WHY DO COMICS TAKE SO LONGGGGG
Danielle Corsetto
Ha HA, I felt CLEVER! >:)
Ralph
Everything about these pages is perfect! Loved the tomatoes.
Ben Hatke
Ooh I was hoping to get back to his story.
David Neale-Lorello
Yes! The “RIP!!!”
Cab
You're taking minutia panels to a whole new level.
Cab
I GASPED LOUDLY
Cliffhanger! Why?!? What is behind that door?
Boum
That RIP!!! DANIELLE