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"Yes, Ma'am" rewrite
🕑 Added 2019-07-23 15:45:43 +0000 UTCI finally got around to it! Just like with the Hot Spots rewrite, to do this one I went back through the original, wrote down the main plot points, and mostly stuck to that when doing this one. The point of rewriting them is since these stories were done so long ago, my writing style (and quality!) has noticeably changed since then - and when I finish everything for the collection, I want it to all be similar in both of these.
Like I've said before, I already have the cover art for the femdom collection completed; it's just this one, a third story, and then the bonus that I have left to do. I'm thinking about redoing "Taken Down A Peg(ging)" for #3...
Also, I decided that "Yes, Ma'am" was too good of a name, so I decided to switch that to the collection's title. I'll have to come up with something for the story itself.
