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ACoL Book 2 - Chapter 9: Sincalindre Sings

🕑 Added 2024-11-08 23:19:09 +0000 UTC

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ealize

I see, that makes sense! I figured that may have been the case but it’s nice to have confirmation

Abraham Carson

Good feedback to have. It was hinted at by the Puppeteer that Vincent heals more quickly. But I can work to address this.

ealize

Loving the second book thus far! I feel like you capture the devastation and chaos really well. Only odd thing about this chapter is that it seems Vincent feels fine really fast? It seemed like he was half dead, and now once he wakes up he’s basically completely fine, physically. Maybe there’s a reason for this that the reader is simply unaware of at the moment? Shrug, figured I’d point it out anyways just in case


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