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The Wild One - Chapter Three + Update

🕑 Added 2020-06-05 00:02:36 +0000 UTC

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Jane

I also took an instant dislike to Crow, which adds to the story and cast of characters greatly. It's going to be interesting to see how things turn out for Max as she comes to her decision and the consequences of it. Also how Tug fits into her tribe as it seems she has some opposition to her title of alpha. Great chapter

Laust Rasmussen

Max’s meeting with Tug’s tribe, went as well as I expected. The fact that Max has to become one of them, or else she dies, is very interresting, and seeing Max’s thought process that makes her, come to her decision was great. There is a bit of hint that Talon, and Thunder are more complex than they seem, with I really enjoy. I will admit, I disliked Crow instantly. My first thought about him was that he for some reason, reminds me of Mundungus from Harry Potter. He just feels like a ‘cowardly snitch’ kind of guy. Overall, a pretty good chapter. It build on Max and Tug’s relationship, introduced new characters, and made me excited for the next chapter.


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