Kelryn Colrite
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Blitz - Chapter Eight
🕑 Added 2019-04-13 12:38:20 +0000 UTCWell, I tried to post this yesterday but for whatever reason it didn't work, so here we go again. Like I said yesterday, I'm more tired than anything so there's not a whole lot for me to really say about this chapter -- not because it's not good, but because of the sleeps. I mentioned how I had stayed up all day yesterday writing a pretty smutty drabble that fits in after this chapter so if everything goes well, you might be seeing that in the near future also. Exciting. And now...
Happy reading!
Comments
Jane
Brilliant. Trent and Rebecca bonding over their hatred of Frankie made me smile. I'm really enjoying the slow burn of Trent realising and coming to terms with his feelings for Brent. The anguish he felt and jealousy was so real. Brilliant, no other word for it.
Shirley Rougely
POSSIBLE SPOILERS: Frankie is very opportunistic and his overall personality makes me sick; His behavior is going to be the end of him once he gets older, and I got a bad feeling that he's gonna do something real stupid, which it's not gonna end well for Brad and especially not Trent. I'm also glad Becca and Trent stood their ground when confronting Brad about Frankie's behavior; the truth definitely hurts Brad in this case, but someone had to tell it like it really is. Hopefully Brad can encourage Frankie to give up this act before the point of no return.
Shirley Rougely
Hmm, I didn't have any issues downloading chapter eight last night; did so around 7:30, nor did I see any typos of any sort, despite you saying you were really tired while doing this chapter.
