Kelryn Colrite
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Blitz - Chapter Two
🕑 Added 2019-01-05 03:46:34 +0000 UTCMan, I am SO fucking jazzed for this story! Seriously, I've had the most fun getting into these characters and telling their story. I sincerely hope that y'all are even half as excited as I am to get into the next chapter of this. I cannot express this enough haha.
I also want to take a second to thank my amazing and wonderful editor that made this chapter so, so much better than anything I've done in awhile. Quite awhile. You're kind of incredible and you're really helping me make this story sing. Can't wait to see where we take Blitz in future chapters.
Okay, no more babble. Happy reading!
Comments
ghdonutshop
I've grown to love Rebecca and Emily and relish any opportunity to see into their world. I'm really enjoying how you're weaving the lives of all your characters into the same universe.
Stray137
You know the first chapter was good, great even, and a lot of fun. But this second chapter hits us with a lot of realism. Trent isnt a two-demensional character. Sure hes a drama queen and a narcissist, both qualities that while fun generally box characters in, but you really let Trent be his own person and im really happy and grateful for that. Cus at the end of the day Trents a person not a character. Thank you so much for writing this story, its definitly something i didnt know i needed lol. But most of all thank you for hosting here on Patreon and sharing your kids with us. Theyre really special people.
Kay Riley
It was absolutely superb. It's amazing how you made Trent such an absolute tool yet relatable -- feeling out of place, never satisfied, every one moving foward without you. Also coincidentally, I was thinking about how it's okay not to be okay maybe an hour or two before I read this chapter. I may be gaining real psychic powers here.
