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Halloween Drabble - Cut Me Some Slack!

🕑 Added 2018-10-31 18:48:51 +0000 UTC

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Kelryn Colrite

Thank you for this. I love hearing this kind of stuff. Believe it or not most of the time I write it's just like, well... hope this makes sense. It's a big boost to know that what I was feeling or trying to express came across well. Seriously, thanks so much.

Tina tenner

I caught a nasty bug which has worn me out, been trying to sleep it off and this morning started feeling a little better so I decided to read something that always makes me feel good inside, my choice was to reread enemies again. I’ve read all your stories (multiple times), but this time something really struck me, I found my favorite scene of all your stories. Just a couple paragraphs. It takes place right after Becca leaves Emmi’s with the picture Emmi drew. Becca arrives home and begins to admiring the picture, running her fingers across the paper and then she notices Emmi in the background. For me the way you wrote this scene was simply beautiful. Your description and detail brought me right there with Becca and I could feel her emotions as she realized how much Emmi loved her and when she hugged the sketch to her chest. You’ve so many great stories with lots of emotion, turmoil and love, but this is the one I’ll remember most. Sorry for the long post, just wanted to let you know.

ghdonutshop

Emily and Rebecca are my favorite of all your characters. Thank you for this newest story featuring them.

Tina tenner

I’m so happy you brought Emmy and Becca back on Halloween. Really enjoyed it, perfect for tonight. Just like the ending though, you don’t have to wait until next Halloween to have more stories about these two. Also happy about getting to read more of your stories. You’re leaving me hanging with Focus.

Stray137

fuck yes more please. i love this couple. very nice and thank you so much for writing what you do. cant wait to see more of focus

Shirley Rougely

Well, Rome wasn't built in a day, and failing to plan means you plan to fail, so if you have to wait a bit longer to release and update stories, then I'm fine with that; I'd rather you take your time and iron all the kinks out, than to rush out something riddled with typos and errors anyway. Nothing wrong with building a little bit of anticipation in my opinion.


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