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🕑 Added 2021-02-15 00:03:20 +0000 UTC

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Julian del Valle Gutierrez

Hello again, Sonay. I've just checked the latest updates of "The Dojo - Fight to Death". The art work as always is amazing. In the written story-line I just find a little bit "twisted" the fact that the little girl is the guy's "own daughter". For some reason I'd prefer the girl being a sort of "supernatural girl" coming from nowhere (almost an "extraterrestial girl" or some kind of incorporated evil ghost that comes to the Dojo to destroy the guy and calls him "Daddy" in a mocking way referring to his age. Though that "evil ghost" of course could be incorporated in "the guy's daughter's body". Anyway I wouldn't prefer that direct blood link ... Please remember my suggestions about close-up death stares in the dead guys ... And for the other "Dojo" story, I think at some point the girl could make the arrogant karate master "loose his pants" ... Don't you think? ...

Alan D

HI Sonay. I hope this is a much better week for you. In "Jenna Beats Her" I think she should just continue crushing your new girl friend without you being there. In the story you did in school where your girl friend watched you get destroyed, the "Jenna GFB" series which was one of my all time favorites, I loved where she saw you being beaten, could do nothing to help you, and then Jenna tore HER apart with fists and knees. I like that better than when you would watch her beaten. But YOU are the artist, I'll like whatever you do.