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For the Patrons (Patreon Exclusive) - N.C.U. - Outline
🕑 Added 2019-04-12 05:05:12 +0000 UTCSo, I am going to be starting to write a story for the N.C.U. characters based on the polls that I put out before, Below is the outline, it is full of SPOILERS! I can't say how close it will be to the final product as I literally just finished it. Enjoy... if you dare!
Laura’s dorm room
- Trisha, Rayne, and Laura are discussing funding for sorority.
- They come up with some fun ideas, for later
- Trisha comments that she asked a pro to come help them out.
- On que knock at door.
- Nadia comes in, looking professional
- Discusses the idea of a stage hypnosis show.
- Debate about whether or not they could do a stage show
- Laura and trish are confident rayne not so much.
- Nadia says she can help rayne.
- Hypnotizes her. Gives her confidence.
- Gieves her a trigger to bring it out.
- Wakes her up. Then triggers her.
- Rayne goes into hypnotist mode and hypnotizes laura and trisha easily
- Goes to hypnotize nadia but gets put out before she can.
- Nadia gets an evil grin and tells the three hypnotized girls she’s like to make a modification to their plans.
3 days later
Student Union Hall,
- Backstage laura and trisha are excited rayne is pacing.
- They notice several of their friends have shown up.
- Basic cast of N.C.U.
- Also notice Lindsey brought jennifer.
- Lights Dim, Laura shakes with excitement and runs on stage.
- Starts doing her pre-talk
- Audience members banter about hypnosis being real or not.
- Laura gets to the part about introducing her cohosts.
- Rayne has a freak out, Trisha tries to calmher down to use the trigger but she is freaking too muc.
- Trisha grabs rayne and kisses her as a distraction.
- Rayne is completely baffled, trisha uses the trigger
- Sexy scne of trigger taking effect.
- The girls go out on stage and all take a bow
- On stage banter with the three girls to the audience. (should be hard as hell to write).
- Asks the audience if anyone has ever been hypnotized before?
- None of the N.C.U. girls remember it. Neither does jennifer.
- Hypnotists look around and comment they need an assistant.
- Drags one of the girls on stage.
- Rayne puts them under in front of everyone.
- Does a few stage gags with the girl.
- The hypnotists turn to the audience and in unison say something about ‘picking whose next’ (figure it out later).
Selection
- All three girls move into audience.
- Rayne Hypnotizes Eve
- Trisha hypnotizes Jackie
- Laura hypnotizes Cheyenne
- Rayne and Trisha hypnotize Carly
- Laura hypnotizes Christine
- Laura and Rayne Hypnotize Jessy
- Trisha and Laura hypnotize Klaire
- All three girls hypnotize Lindsey
- Lindsey hypnotizes Jennifer while the other three treat her like a puppet on strings.
- Brings the girls all up on stage and puts them on chairs.
Stage show
- Deepener, do a realistic one and get the girls deep.
- Stage gag 1
- Stage gag 2
- Stage gag 3
- Sexual gag 1
- Sexual gag 2
- Sexual gag 3
- Maybe more?
- Rayne gets dominant with the girls, puts laura under
- Puts trisha under
- Starts to dominate the girls as Laura and trisha move from person to person whispering.
- Madkes them all call her mistress. Ham it up.
- Trisha wakes up winks at audience
- Sneask up behind Rayne and puts her out.
Wrapping up the show
- Has the girls programed to stand and give a sexy goodbye to everyone
- The hypnotists all take their bows while the girls act sexy and flirty.
- Lights change to a blue tint and Nadia’s voice says “Freeze!” over the speaker
- All girls are completely frozen.
- Descriptions
- Nadia walks out and comments that the real show is about to begin.
- As she says this the females in the audience get a dazed look in their eyes.
- Nadia comments about the subliminals being a wonderful thing.
- Starts to auction the hypnotized girls off one by one.
Individual scenes
- Brief run downs of what the guys make the girls do.
- Eve
- Jackie
- Cheyenne
- Klaire
- Carly
- Jessy
- Christine
- Lindsey
- Jennifer
- Laura
- Trisha
- Rayne
- Shows Nadia walking back stage with a wad of cash counting it.
- Smiles and walks in directly into the line of sight of a pocket watch
- Unknown male character uses it to hypnotize her.
- Has his way with her. While pocketing the money.
Next day.
- Girls all head home deeply hypnotized.
- Klaire and rayne
- Lindsey and Jennifer
- Christine and jessy
- Carly and Jackie
- Cheyenne (and her roommate, Erin? maybe?)
- Trisha and Laura
- Nadia.
The end.
- All girls walk out hypnotized and thank the patrons.
- Shameless plug here =cP
Epilogue
- Email from Jennifer to thief and apprentice,
- Details hypnotic events,
- Shameless plug
- Maybe include a picture? (I like that idea!)
Comments
Margaria Manuele
Suggest to shift it in Old and New testament😂 i wish i could read it today
