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Arcanist - Chapter 45

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 12:20:01 +0000 UTC

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BlastYoBoots

(If it's not too much trouble, when you make the edit maybe let me know which chapter it's in so I can find it and slot the adjustments into my mental context; I like re-reading and remembering the revised versions of a work when they're changed!)

Denizcan Uçuran T4icho

You know what, that's a great suggestion. I will add a line in there since there's a few days skip in that transition. Thanks for pointing that out!

BlastYoBoots

That makes sense-- in a story as well-written as this has been though, I imagine his change in mindset should be noted or signaled somewhere? Or a bit of his reflexive discomfort at being called it despite his decision to be open about the name from now on? (Unless this was already mentioned in an earlier chapter and I forgot or missed it.) The explanation makes perfect sense, but unless the story mentions it, it might look to the reader more like an author oversight.

Denizcan Uçuran T4icho

Oh, he was hiding it in his old world since he didn't want anyone to know he's basically Master Eldras's adopted son. He doesn't have to worry about that here

BlastYoBoots

Selin called him “Mr. Kosthal”— did he reveal his surname to the others in an earlier chapter? I thought he was sensitive about that?


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