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Demon Princess: Chapter 27: What Follows Fear

🕑 Added 2025-10-14 14:49:09 +0000 UTC

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Aleah Cat

I believe you meant “raze” the capital to the ground, instead of raise. Not exactly a common term, though.

Daniel McConville

I want to agree with others, you are slowly showing us more and more about each individual of the Cult and they feel like real incredible flawed people. I think my least favorite is the 'leader' his whole fanatical ravings is a little one dimensional right now, but their is strong hints of more backstory there. While these 'I'm in my MMO hundreds of years in the future as my max level no-life character who ground out every skill and killed everything as a world first raider' stories are starting to pop up all over the place, it's nice to see you taking the MC in a different direction. She's actually having mental instability between her IRL self, her RP selves, and the mantle of her character and it's confusion with the *real* Princess of Evil Demon Ladies. One thing that always strikes me as odd in these stories is people don't immediately test out their entire spell list and abilities. Like I know the author doesn't want to vomit out pages of spells, and you have made it clear she is a melee/spellcaster hybrid so her amount of spells are not as insane as someone like Vivi in the Max Level Archmage series. She's also shown she has no healing abilities of others, and her spells are mostly offensive/movement/mild utility, but I guess a bit of understanding of her limits would be nice. On one hand she's not an Arch Mage but everyone else in the world seems to be struggling with Tier 1/2/3 magic, and her understanding of Runes seems magnitudes above everyone else so far. Really want to see her rocking her massive sword and some black heavy demon armour. Think it would have been cooler if she drew her sword with some kind of effect as its part of her class rather than just a physical item in her inventory. It reads more like some kind of soul bound weapon rather than just a customizable item.

Na'im

Love the chap again ND! The amount of life you’re breathing into the cultist is so refreshing, Marie’s inner conflict and resolve is amazing! Looking forward to the other POVs 🤓


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